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Monday, June 20, 2011

Kindness (Short Story 2)

A child cried alone in a basket of fruits. A passer by looked around, seeing none around in this locality of Old Delhi. He called around and hurriedly left the place before someone could see him. Another car passed by, a couple around 40 stopped by, saw the child, waited around and called 101. It was past midnight. Not many lights were on in the houses nearby. The couple picked up the child and cuddled it. It felt as if it was their own child. The hugged it and hurriedly left the place with the child in the car. Probably they did not want the police to take it from them. It was a girl and they did not have one even in 15 years of their marriage. A cute one. One window on the 3rd floor of a wretched house, Neelam kept crying in her old house at GB Road till she finally fell asleep. The most peaceful sleep she ever had. Her daughter wouldnt have to live that life ever.

14 comments:

Subhomoy ATGS Bakshi said...

AWESOME! :O
SPEECHLESS!!!

Subhomoy ATGS Bakshi said...

This is AWESOME! :O

Sacrifice! :(

Smeeta said...

very well written...

I had to search about GB road for it to make complete sense.

Nishant said...

@Moy... Thanks yaar :)
@Smeeta.. Thanks. I guess I could have mede it complete by putting a couple of words which would describe the area..

SHIRSA AICH said...

awesome!

SHIRSA AICH said...

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Phoenix said...

wow ! short stories are the toughest to write .. coz u have less time for the reader to connect to the characters .. but u are so effortless ! way to go !

Nishant said...

@Shirsa: Tx
@Surabhi: Thank you.. thank you :)

Tukai said...

cool stry :-) with good story line.
errr.....dont mind.....but they didnt have problem with adoption rights?

Tukai said...

cool storyline and nyc innovative work
but didnt the couple have problems with adoption rigths?

R0hIt said...

awesome bro :)..touching

Kim said...

well written nishant :)

kim said...

Well written nishant :)

Shreyas Raghavendra said...

Good one :)